Wednesday, 21 March 2012

Jen's second poem

Open the door shut the door the story of my life,
I looked into your eyes, hoping to be your wife
You had no intention of making me your connection
So i settled for nothing one day hoping for something
But you gave me no hope so i gave up and did nothing
Jen From:

Careless Whisper

I can hear them whisper
With their heads bound together I heard them
My heart whisper to them to love me
But love me they don't, judge me they do
When they look at me their eyes whispers with hatred
Hatred i saw in their eyes and it broke my heart
My heart no long beats strong
But my heart will shield me against the whispers....
It is all I've got and it is all i need...
My hearts whispers

Thursday, 8 March 2012

Hidden Feelings

Do you at times feel used?
If you think your life is hard come spend a day in hers
What can she do when they tell her that her best isn't enough
For her the most wasted of all days is one without laughter

Jen's first Poem

You are the apple of my eye 
This is why, I cannot deny 
You give me butterflies
When I look into your eyes 
You make my body tingle
You make me wanna never mingle
Cos your the one I want 


Funny lines I either read somewhere, saw on TV or made up.

"I'm looking at the situation from different perspective and the bottom view is looking very persuasive".

"I usually have to know a girl before I let her spoon me" replies "It's not like we're forking".

Sweet 'n' Sour: every relationship starts up sweet and ends in sour.

Only listen to someone if they are a picture perfection of their preachings.

With the right bait you can catch just about anything.

Embrace the happiness and the sorrow because they both make a powerful drug.

There are questions in life we all have to answer and there are one we can't bare to consider... That's just life.

Don't beat yourself up when you make a mistake because I guarantee you it will be a lesson well learnt.

Thursday, 9 February 2012

Hi im a newcomer

My name is Susan. I am a 20 year old student with an interest in creative writing.
i would like to use this blog to share some of the poems I've written so far and hope you enjoy it.